revelatory landscape
Geometric Hot Springs, 2005
by German del sol
Geometric paths and huts reveal different views of the natural forest environment that is surrounding the space.
source: http://www.archdaily.com/4190/geometric-hot-springs-german-del-sol/
The Red Ribbon, Tanghe River Park,2006
by Turenscape
The bold and solid line provides a well-defined path and multiple views of a forest like park.
source: http://www.contemporist.com/2008/03/27/red-ribbon-in-tanghe-river-park/
“Ashar Macha” (Platform of Hope), 2010
by Khondaker Hasibul Kabir
A platform full of green vegetation emitting an environment of natural peace and beauty, temporarily takes you away from the slum to a space full of life and tranquility.
source: http://laforhumanity.org/ashar-macha-platform-of-hope/
LA102 ActionScapes 
5 – ok
3 – solid line may provide a path but it does not ‘provide’ views. It may provide new ways of viewing the park but the question is actually: what does red ribbon reveal about the park? Perhaps its solidness makes the changing nature around it more visible.
3 – peace, beauty, life and tranquility are fine virtues but are not actions on the landscape; use words that suggest DOING something to the landscape.